Monday, May 24, 2010

Free Type~poems~

                            Poem title:?What is Love?

Love is a feeling that most people get
Falling when someone will catch you
You know they will catch you
That is why you fall in the first place
But are they the ones you can trust?
Love leads to trust
Which is what you must have to contain love
But for those who have trust and love
Did they catch you?
Love.



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My farting poem!-;-farts-;-

                                         CHEESE ARE RELATED TO FARTS!!!


I like cheese it makes me fart
Would you like to fart with me? 
Lets start a fartig melody!

All together now!
fart fart fart
fart fart fart
fart fart fart fart fart fart.....wait for it....................\
ffaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaart!

Friday, May 21, 2010

FINAL CHAPTER!

Before Jenna died she saw something that changed her life. She saw a figure that looked almost like the heart theft. But before she could do or say anything the heart theft tried to stabbed her and she screamed to the top of her lounges. Her heart was racing so fast that she....woke up? It was all a dream? How could that be. All of that happened and it was her imagination. She ran to her mom and told her about everything while her mom was under the covers. Her mom didn't say anything and she got mad. But when she pulled the sheets from her moms face.....her mom was dead. With her heart taken out. For a second she just sat there. But after a while she cried and cried and cried. That is what lead her to what had happened to the dream but the only thing is that the heart stealer didn't kill her she just died on the bench in the Park all alone no where or no body to turn to.

Part 2 of ~the heart theft~

When the heart theft managed to see what the man was doing he was confused. The man had said, "I know what you did,its not a secret anymore." "Well then what are you going to do about it?",said the heart theft."I'm going to have to kill you",pronounced the man. "You don't have the guts to kill me,responded the heart theft."Oh reeeaaallllyyy..."Them man got up and stabbed the heart theft seven times in the face and ripped out his heart and stepped on it. "Who has guts now." Said the man. And right before the man had left he spit on the heart thefts face and walked back home. When he got back  home his family had such curiosity in their minds. They were asking him questions like,"what happened',"Did you get him", and the hardest one to answer was from his eight year old daughter who almost started to cry and asked,"Did you kill him?" The man ignored all of the questions and kept that one question that his daughter said to him in his mind. He didn't sleep for about four days thinking about why he had killed him. He thought he was almost like a hero when he had done that but now he think he DOESN'T have the guts to kill some body and get over it. He was starting to think that he was JUST like the heart theft because of what he had done. He felt like that for several years until one day he thought he \was going crazy and went to the apartment the heart theft was in and hung himself right next to the heart theft. When his family found out about what happened they went crazy. They thought of all the things that had happened to the heart theft and to their father and husband. They thought so much and it was so hard without him. But they decided to move on and forget about the past because the past is the past. The mom killed her self a couple of years after the death of her husband because of depression and the feelings of not being loved. So then two girls were all alone. Their names were Sofia And Jenna. The were similar to Maya and but The only thing that is different about them is because Sofia got hit by a car and Jenna died like Maya,on the street,alone,cold,and no where to go. But the weird thing is what she saw when she was on the street. It was......TO BE CONTINUED......

Thursday, May 20, 2010

The heart theft

                                         ~ The Heart Theft~                                


 "I am not doing that!" Chuckles came from both of the girl while they were playing truth or dare. But while they were only concentrated on the game they were playing they did not notice the man enter their unlocked door to their house. They also did not see him lock the door behind him making sure that they could not get in the house at all times. The girls, Maya and Sasha did not notice anything until they heard their moms' terrified scream. When the girls heard the scream the ran to the door and yanked it as hard as they could but it just wouldn't open. So the brain,Maya had came up with an idea to climb up the pipe leading to the door which they had hear their moms` terrified scream. When they both got up the pipe the managed to held the window seal so they can look around for their mom. They started to look around still holding on to the window seal  and didn't see anything. The girls lost hope but out of nowhere they saw their mom from a distance gesturing them to go away but before they could realize what their mom was doing, they had observed their mom get a knife through the heart and got it taken out and they were traumatized by what they saw. They couldn't take it so Sasha(The tough one) got so mad that she actually jumped into the window and kicked the guy in the face. Not knowing the man was going to do Sasha had turned around to help Maya in the house. The man had got up with Sasha not knowing and Mayas jaw dropped. Sasha had asked her what happened but Maya was unable to speak and she just said :"RUN!" Sasha didn't know what she was talking about and just tried to help her in. Maya let go and ran away and Sasha still didn't know what she was talking about. But before Sasha could turn around and see what Maya did that for Sasha got a knife through her heart and got it taken out from her body n cut up and put into a plastic bag. The heart theft had put it in a plastic bag and threw it in his long jacket.The man flew out of the house as fast as he can making sure that no one notices the blood sheds on his face. Maya almost had a break down when she was walking on the side walk of no where. She had no where to go, no one to turn to, and was hungry as ever. She was sad of the thought of her mom and sister being dead. Maya went on about her self in the cold world until one day she died of a disease and hunger. A couple of years later a family had moved into the house that all the girls had been killed in. They didn't notice anything until they were planting flowers and noticed a blood stain in the dirt. And as the father of the family that moved in kept going he noticed a peace of a heart. He couldn't believe his eyes! He had concluded that  there had been a man there taking out hearts. He called 911 right away and the police said there was nothing that they could do. The man said that if they weren't going to do anything then he would do something about that thinking that the police didn't know what they were doing. A few days later the man of The family had found the guys address and went to his house. When the heart stealer opened the door the man punched him in his face so hard it made him K.O.. The heart stealer woke up to find out that he was ties up on the floor in a dark room with a light pointed straight down at him. The heart theft had looked around and noticed a while after that the guy who knocked him out was in a chair sharpening up a knife!TO BE CONTINUED.....

Wednesday, May 19, 2010

Research For Novel

How Important Is A Heart? :-\

http://www.worldinvisible.com/apologet/humbody/heart.htm


That will show you how important the heart is and also that it also doesn't always matter about love. Love i just a feeling. But the Killer in my story does not know that he only thinks of the heart as if it were locked into someone else. So that is what caused him to steal hearts from people he doesn't even like most of the time.

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1052/528638665_a12c861e87.jpg?v=0


If you press that i had got that from google but my point of that was to show what the killer did which was actually take peoples heart out and slice it up n keep it in its home. That is what the killer did to all the hearts.

The Killers Backstory

It all started when all he wanted was love. He didn't get it until he met a woman named Natalie. He thought she was perfect....But he was WRONG! She left him and went to a guy just because he was a little more richer than he was. Ever since then he wasn't the same. For the first time he felt alive and like he was safe until that guy came along. But he will not quit until he finds love again. So he has taken it upon himself to get love again. Nut not from Natalie. So now he is the.......HEART THEFT! Will he come after you? Are you on his side in this situation? These are all the questions we have against the heart theft.

Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Thursday, April 29, 2010

Reccomendation to book=]

I reccomend the book i am making to everyone. I say that because it has making is called "the heart skinner." The book that i am making also isfeeling and is acton packed non-stop. The book i am making will have you to the edge of your chair trying to find out who did what. And i cant tell you unless you read the book because that will give it away. All i can sof ay is that th ebook i am  mind blowing. The book has a bunch of action and your eyes will never leave the screen!That is why i reccomend my book to every one!=]

Pitch.

                     Harvard out line
Mind blowing book!
A.Allot of action!
B.Mind blowing actions characters make in the story.
C..Have you at the edge of your seat because of the hook
D.Its a horror!

Characters actions!
A. Killing  children!
B.Men killing men!
C. Violence after violence.
D.Betraying others!

  Wouldn't want an ending to the book!
A. Very addictive
B.Sad
C.Involves family finding SOMETHING?
D.Crazy!

Monday, March 1, 2010

HOMEWORK#96

SUMMARY-I am reading the book"new moon."So far the vampires and wolfs are fighting over bella,if vampire and wearwolfs existed.A boy named jacob is now bellas protector now that edward is not there anymore for her safety. But bella keeps doing dangerous things to get edward to come back because she doesnt want to lose him.Nor Jacob and Edward do not dislike bella so that makes them not comfortable with eachother. When Jacob turned into a wolf that made me think if he would always do that because now bella would be used to having wearwolfs and vampires in her life. That is what happened so far in the book that i am reading.

ANALYZE- I beleive that the author is trying to tell me that if jacob keeps saving her life and edward is in no sight that she might fall in love with jacob and get over edward. But at the same time i think that there is a peice of her that still is in love with edward.That is what i think the author of the book is trying to tell meabout the book i am reading

Tuesday, February 9, 2010

The last orrangutan questions :-)

3.I say that the author of the article talked about the orangutans before the girl( Galdikas) for two reasons.1= The author wants things to be in chronological oder.2= So the author can explain why Galdikas had an interest with the orrangatans.That is why i think the author showed how the article shows the story of the orrangatans before they talk about Galdikas.
4.Deatils that show why galdikas is motivated by more than a scientific curiosity because in the article it says that she takes them on feild trips and that she shows them the forest and what to eat and everything about the forest. That goes above and beyond. That is why i think Galdikas is motivated by more than a scientific curiosity.
5.An inncident had once happened with my old pet. It was a dog named Andrew. When we first got him he had did a little tinkle on the sofa. But after we showed him how to act in the house by training with him he never did that again. That proves that all you need to do is show a pet how to act and what to do when they have to do something.

Sunday, February 7, 2010

HOMEWORK#89

                        THE LIGHTNING THEIF,(THE BOOK I AM READING).

1.There are several different themes in the book i am reading (the lightning theif). Themes such as love,betrayal,and hatrid. This book is action packed.

2.I cant really see this book being like any other book. I say that because this book is different and not like any other book i have read so far. I say that because this book has greek mythology and not that many n=books and movies have greek mythology in them as the hole topic of the book.

3.I would reccomend this book to anybody who is interested in action packed book and adores or loves or likes greek mythology. I cant reccomend this to just one person because there is just so much things that can make every body go to the edge of there seats(and not because they gotta pee).

Thursday, February 4, 2010

HOMEWORK#88

Noun-Yorie went to the store.
Pronoun-I got a very cute sweater yesterday.
Verb-I am walking across the bridge.
Adjectives-That is a lovely sweater.
Adverb-I am really fast.
Conjunctions-I get along with her now.
Prepostitons- I am at the beach.
Articles-The cat bit me!
Interjections-How could you !

Thursday, January 28, 2010

HomeWork #84

SUMMARY-I am reading "the lightning theif'. I have read about a boy named percy jackson and his two freinds Annabeth and Grover. I have read sooo much and learned so much. I learned about greek mythology and penty more. I also learned about the lives of the gods and goddesses children. I now know that gods and goddesses go around having babies with mortal/humans. Also that they cover theyre true identity so that they wount be found. That is what i learned from the book i am reading.

ANNALYZE:I think tht the author is trying to tell me that percy will be meeting some pretty awsome gods and goddesses. As well as going through battles with gods and goddesses.That is what i think the author is trying to tell me almost everywhere in the book.

Tuesday, January 19, 2010

A non-fiction i read was called "a child called it." It was about a little boy who was tortured by his mother and lived like a slave. I read that book because of the interestinh dialogue in the blurb(back of the book giving a brief summary).To tell the truth i like non-fiction better then fiction. I like non-fiction better then fiction because non-fiction teaches the real facts to the world like science or geography and plenty other thing. An fiction books that involve princesses and other made up charaters dont teach you anything unless its a myth of an acient time. The subject i like reading about non-fiction is in geography because it show where location is and things that uncover it. That is what i think is the best in non-fiction.

Monday, January 18, 2010

SUMMARY: The book i am reading is called "The west side story." In this part of the book i learned a couple of things about the characters. I learned that most of them are type tacky. I also learned that they will do anything for their old leader tony. One of the gang members of  the jets said we have to do all we can to get tony back. That is what i leaned from the book. I think tony is doing a good job of not being in the gang. Also i learned that tony does better wothout the gang, i say that because in the book it says while the members of the jets are on the streets doing nothing that bennifits there life, tony has a job and isnt waisting his life on things that wont benifit him.

ANALYZE:  For this part of the book i think the author is trying to tell me that tony is better off the gangs and so is the rest oof the members but they stay there in the gangs on the streets.That is what i think the author is trying tot ell me. I think the people in the book are also trying to tell me a clue to something. I think they are trying to tell me that they might be given a chance to change things and get things straight and be with tony but not in a gang sort of way. That is what i think the author and the characters are trying to tell me in this part of the book.

Thursday, January 14, 2010

REPORTER ENTRY ON THE BOMBING IN BIRMINGHAM

                                     BIRMINGHAM OR BOMBINGHAM?!

Today is september 15 1963. Today is the day that a bombing has land in a church while it was in session. We found out that four little girls have been murdered and some have been injured and are being rushed to the hospital. As i beleive you are all wondering is,"who did this,what did they do that,when did this happen,why" and plenty more questions. Well you have come to the right place at the right time to find out. The cops beleive that it was two white men that had did this terrible thing. They also think that these two white men did this because of racism. It is very racist for this incident as you see the church has been bombed and all these people are trying to find their babies under the pile of burned walls and ashes.

"Wait is that what it looks like, i think i see a little boy going into the smoke and little peices of fire still standing." Is that even possible. "Some one get that little boy". "Ill do it." Thank you Brendon" We have found out these little girls names. There names are, Denise McNair,Carole Robertson,Addie Mae Collins,and Cynthia Wesley. R.I.P little girls. ( cries come from the little girls families.) I am Jenny edwards and that is all we have today have a blessed day.

I FIND MY LITTLE BROTHER UNDER A LAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All I have to say is that we are in this stupid car looking like a bunch of confused black folks. I always have to do something by force and its some jive stuff man. And the worst things in this car ride is joetta`s slob and kenny`s yakity yak record. I swear when I go home im gonna...... We are here! This place looks to silent I wonder how people could survive like that. No one was outside but me, my family and some scrawnyold lady waving her cane like a bunch of kids just threw eggs at her door. Wait a minute...thats grandma sands and shes happy. For some reason I  thought that she would be easy to get through but when the family got close to her she was the meanest thing ever. She hardly had any teeth,she smelled like peppermints and coffe,(which is a bad mix) and she had on a big robe in the heat. How could she live like that. I decided to just go looking around but before I can get off the front yard grandma sands makes me go to the store for her. I hate doing that I wasnt even here for ten minutes and I have to do chores.

When I come back from the store I see dad and some man that looked about grandma sands age. I came up to dad and this man and asks dada who it is. When he tells me that, that is mr.robertson and that they are talking about going hunting I ask him if he ever shot an animal because I was so facinated in going. This jive lookin man gunna tell me that he neva shot an animal that he saved one .So after a while this ol man brings up this idea that we should go hunting. I was about to tell him more like rescue patrol but i remembered that I didnt wanna stay with granma sands for the rest of my life and turn out like mr.robertson saving animals from the wild. So instead of making that comment I just got everything we needed gave the stuff to grandma sands and we were gonna hit the road but while we were about to leave my numskull of a sister and brother wanted to join. Ughhhhhhhh why does this always happen. Well it wasnt my dicision so they had to come with us. While us kids, well two kids and one teen hit the road on our own. Me and my lil sis hit the road and passed a sign that had said to keep off and some other stuff so we did that. And then we came across another sign right when I was about to read it I heard my little brothers scream for help. I ran throught the forest while telling joetta to go home and following the voice of kenny at the same time. When I got near a lake I saw kenny`s shoes. Then I looked at the water and saw a body under it, oooo no ooo no oooo no. As soon as I dived in the water I saw kenny and he is kicking and punched looking like he was trying to fight the water like there is some one in it. I try real hard to get him out but as soon as I did  that he started coughing up stuff as im crying.Im sooooooo scared.

Tuesday, January 12, 2010

X-TRA CREDIT (POEM)

                                                    WACKY DAY
I GOT TO SCHOOL,AND IT WAS WACK.
MY SKIRT FLIPPED UP AND I BROKE MY BACK,
I COUGHED,I SNEEZED I CRIED AND,AND,ACHOOOO
AWWW MAN I GOTTA LEAVE SCHOOL,
I GOT HOME AND SAT ON MY STOOL,
NO ONE WAS THERE SO I THOUGHT I RULED,
I TURNED ON THE TV TO WATCH CARTOONS,
BUT ALL THERE WAS,WAS THE STUPID NEWS,
I GOT UP SET,
I WAS A TOTAL WRECK,
SO I SLAMMED MY DOOR AND BROKE MY NECK,
I SIGHED AND CRIED A LITTLE BIT MORE ,
UNTIL I HAD A THROAT SOAR,
IM SORRY I HAVE TO END THE POEM SO SHORT,
BUT ILL BE BACK TO THIS SO CALLED RESORT.

Thursday, January 7, 2010

HOMEWORK#69

 blue=verb
red=adjective
green=pronoun
black=regular
pink =nouns

SUMMARY: In this chapter of the book i found out that when there was a battle so the jetss can keep there turf. Not all of the jets were in most battles. Also there were scars on some of the jets bodies because to prove that they faught the toughest of guys and still won. Noone dared to battle the jets unless it was the new PRs that just moved into the jets turf. Every one knew that the jets thought the new PRs were dirty and throwing them into a river would be a favor towards the sharks. There is a tomboy that trys to join the gang. The book descibes her. They describe her as flatchested,no butt,no hips,bad haircut,and baggy jeans all the time.That is what i learned from that part of the book.

ANALYSIS: The book is trying to tell me that there are some tough people in the jets gang. As well as the sharks gang. But what really dragged my attention was when the book said that only the stupid PRs were willing to battle the jets. Thats what i think the book and author is trying to tell me.

Wednesday, January 6, 2010

HOMEWORK # 68 [THE WEST SIDE STORY]

SUMMARY: In this chapter of the book i found out that when there was a battle so the sharks can keep there turf not all of them were in the fight. Also that there were scars on some of the jets body to prove that they fought the toughest of guys and still won. No one dared to touch the sharks unless it was the new PRs that just moved into there turf. The people that lived on there turf knew that the sharks thought that thr PRs are dirty and that throwing them intyo a river would be a favor for them. There is a tomboy that trys to be in the gang. The book describes her. They describe her as flat chested,no hips,hair cuts up to her ears,and wears baggy jeans all the time. That is what i learned from the part i learnded from the book.

ANALYSIS: The bok is trying to tell me that there are some tough people in the jets gang. As well as the sharks gang. But what really dragged my attention in the book that i think was trying to get my attention was when it said in the book that no one was willing to fight the jets,only the stupid PRs wanted to fight. That is what i think the book and author was tryig to tell me.

Tuesday, January 5, 2010

homework #67 " IM GOING TO BE GOOD AT EVERYTHING IN 2010"

I have many acheivements and events i want to happen in the year of 2010. One thing that i beleive all sixth graders want is to pass the 6th grade and to go to the 7th. I also want to get better grades i the best and last marking periods thi year and the rest o the years i will have at fda. Another thing i want to happe but is outside of school was to become an atress if the people i auditioned for accept me which i am very confident in. But my main focuse in school is to just improve on my homework hndins which i am still working on, to study more for test so i can  always be prepared or test nd so i can get better test scores as well.

In 2010 i will be a whole different person,well not a complete different person but just during class hours and school hours. I think i can improve those cheivements by trying harder to stretch my focus band and to do my homework daily. And i will also try with my acting career as well. And lastley i will also do my best at everything right away and all the way.

Monday, January 4, 2010

HOMEWORK #66(the west side story)

SUMMARY: In this part of the book tony (gang leader has quit.) They try to get him back but so far he is having things other then being with the sharks. I also learned that some of the boys in the gangs ar fakes. They are fakes because sometimes they would get hurt and then act like it doesnt hurt baecaus ethey want to impress there fellow gang members. In the book it said that there were gangs then roaches on the west side, it also said that the west said was infeccted with gangs. That was a funny way of saying it because instead of saying infected of roaches they said it was infected with gangs. That is a metophor. The book also says that the jets are looking for the sharks. They are  REALLY after there gang leader. And he is claimbed to be tne strongest. So now the jets are going around seeing if people know about him and trying to get the fgacts right. All tghey know abouty the gang leader of the sharks is that he is peurto rican and that he speaks english in a spanish accent.


 ANALYSIS: I think the author is trying to tell me that some of the jets might be sensitive. I also think he/she is trying to tell me that the shark leader has a lot coming his way if the jets find him. And the last thing i think the author iis trying to tell me is that the jets want toni (there leader) to come back because with him they would always be occupied. That is what i think the author is trying to tell me in the book, "the west side story".